I was building castles..
of sand on a windy day ,
The first winds blew and my castle was down … dreams all swept away .
I was building a hut …
of mud on a rainy day ,
The first rains came and washed my hut down …. dreams all swept away .
I was building a tower …
of wax on a bright sunny day ,
The first noon rays shined and melted my tower … again all dreams swept away .
All this while I was wrong
All this while I kept dragging it along … the dreams who did not wish to stay !!
Brilliant 😊
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Thank you so much for your feedback 😊😊
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Your choice of words really gets your intended message across. I specially loved the last line!
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Thank you Neha !! This is a poem close to my heart … 😊
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It is beautiful! 🙂
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Very nice.
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Thank you Manoj ! Sorry for responding late
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