SANDCASTLES …

I was building castles..

of sand on a windy day ,

The first winds blew and my castle was down … dreams all swept away .

I was building a hut …

of mud on a rainy day ,

The first rains came and washed my hut down …. dreams all swept away .

I was building a tower …

of wax on a bright sunny day ,

The first noon rays shined and melted my tower … again all dreams swept away .

All this while I was wrong

All this while I kept dragging it along … the dreams who did not wish to stay !!

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    1. Thank you so much for your feedback 😊😊

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  1. Neha Sharma says:

    Your choice of words really gets your intended message across. I specially loved the last line!

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    1. Thank you Neha !! This is a poem close to my heart … 😊

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      1. Neha Sharma says:

        It is beautiful! 🙂

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